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Once I was in love...
Written by Elbisrever on October 31, 2009
A little poem I once wrote, a long, long time ago when I was so very much in love..
"In your eyes I could always find,
joy and serenity for my mind.
But with that bliss walked hand in hand,
my fate of failure across the land.
I was in love with you so bad,
that sense of reality I did not had.
'Cause with your answer came a blow,
that shattered my heart when you said "No".
I don't regret the times we spent,
I don't blame you for the pain in me.
You chose the feelings you wanted to send,
And I must not forget that you are free
A gaping void now fills my soul,
an aching crack you could make whole.
But in the end I've come to find,
that I have lost which was never mine."
- Jaïr
(P.S. don't worry, I'm a very happy person now ;)
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Ashley74 said on June 2, 2010:
really good poem....i love this! i'm very yang for understad this but i do.... so cool....touching... Sometimes i write poems.... it's about missing home, mother, father and brother. i love them so much!!!
But now i'm in BSG and can't see them. http://dipdive.com/member/Ashley74/blog/20080 please, check my new blog...;)
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mery1a said on December 19, 2009:
wow this is a great poem, really beaytiful
and i´m glad to know that ur feeling better now :)
sdecordova said on November 1, 2009:
Thats a really touching poem.....FALLING in love IS dangerous. :(
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