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Poem: If I was meant to be alone
Written by Estrella82 on November 14, 2009
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have eyes
To see the beauty of your soul reflecting back in yours
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have a nose
The sweet fragrance of your skin washed away in seas of blue
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have ears
To let the lullaby of your voice fill me with song
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have lips
Your gentle kiss a mere figment of forgotten imagination
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have skin
To feel the warmth of your breath send shivers through my body
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have hands
To hold on to yours; energies flowing seamlessly as one
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have feet
Faded footprints blown to dust on the pathway to your door
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have a voice
To send your name with the wind bearing the message of my soul
If I was meant to be alone I wouldn’t have a heart
Beating in rhythm with yours; sharing the wonder of true love...
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Aoife
Estrella82 said on November 15, 2009:
Thanks for all your lovely comments guys, I'm blown away! :) The weird thing is it wasn't actually meant to turn out like this from my original thought... but hey if you like it that's cool! Thanks xxx
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xtina said on November 14, 2009:
and you wrote this poem in such a little time...if that's not talent, then i don't know, kill me!
KIK!
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Cristina said on November 14, 2009:
I absolutely should turn into a man like i told u some time ago and marry you..hahah...very nice Em..you are always so sweet :)
MFLxtina said on November 14, 2009:
that was beautifully written :)
mine is crap beside yours haha! honestly, it's a very nice poem. i like how you describe the details about each senses
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I have read this many times, and till now I haven't known what to reply as which Word I use wouldn't describe how truely amazing this is, So beautifully written.. YOU should do more as you have a talent there Emily :-)