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Depth
Written by jagelzey on June 9, 2009
You go through life
You live and breathe
You look at your surroundings
and Experiences you perceive
You take it in
and Try to grow
You then reflect
Using what you know
It is these ideals
that give complexity
One's own thoughts
Help gain Prosperity
It is one's thoughts
More than shades of gray
Not just black and white
but Depth that lay
In layers of the heart
Look and it will be found
Find your inner depth
It'll be profound...
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roofyrox said on July 20, 2009:
WOW!!!! That is amazing, jared. you write so well, and I am going to put this on my wall. well said, and good job!!! The poem is so so deep. :) One of the best I've EVER read. :)
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i still feel it i understand it completly i guess its a poets intuition u can turn tht into a song