Here's my tune!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Written by jokes7 on March 14, 2010

So have been brave enough 2 post this after readin some things on here i aint scared 2 show my stuff as this def looks like the place 2 put it.  I would jus like 2 say sorry 4 my grammer and spelling as it really aint my strongest point!!!!!!!!!!

This is my song it's called Dirty Peeps, take a look n tell me wot u think if it's 2 deep i will remove it!!!!!! Please be honest!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dirty Peeps!!!!!!!!!!!

Verse 1

Bare peeps walk on this land

each 1 just trying 2 understand

that route that goes the same way

fast and slow taking it day by day

all peeps from different scenes

babies,  little peeps and the teens

20's, 30's middle aged and old

all fighting in a world so cold

battling in a place where we are held

but there is so many dirty peeps in this world

all alone in there messed up bubble

look in there eyes and ur see trouble

worst kind the decetful sort

jus dont care won't call a hault

2 there shit as they stand there proud

but 2 me they shouldnt b allowed

2 roam this land and do this crap

won't fix this a single slap

won't fix this a prison term

jus 1 building so they can all burn

Verse 2

So who is it on top my hitlist

the pedo, abuser and the rapist

all kinds, all different creeds

all around the world this shit breeds

uk 2 the states its everywhere

baby 2 granny they jus dont care

so tell me what makes u tick

cos what u do is so dam sick

mess up peeps leave them confused

all worthless cos u abused

left 2 rot as they become a wreck

its so cold down on that deck

turn 2 drugs, turn 2 drink

or do both so they can't think

numb the noise so they don't hear

numbing it so it aint so clear

deep in depth so cold and low

cos u were deaf when they said no

saying no but u couldnt take

wouldnt stop even doh they shake

wouldnt stop even doh they tremble

gave them demons as they assemble

Verse 3

Scare them so much so they dont yell

intimadate so they don't tell

intimadate so they can't fight

make them think what you do is right

enjoy there screams and watch them cry

like it aint wrong but still u lie

still u stand and look in the mirror

when you stand there how come you dont quiver

how comes you dont look and proper stair

if you did then u would care

if you did then you would stop

when you do this r u at your top

when you do this how do u feel

do u tally up them lives u steal

is it good, do u feel great

that around the world your breedin hate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for reading x